Ambra Rhoads
Mr. Juarez
English 10/Period 8
10 February 2013
High
School Experiences
During my High School experience I have encountered many
struggles which have led to my accomplishments and have helped me create
aspirations. To some people High School is the easiest thing in the world. I
used to think that, but I do not anymore. I have had many struggles that I did
not think I would. That is because throughout middle school I was a straight A
student and as soon as I came to Early College High School that was no longer
the case. I went from straight A’s to mostly B’s and C’s. In my house those
grades are frowned upon. So I had to figure out what I needed to work on and
what was okay.
I am not a perfect student. I never really thought I was;
I just got decent grades. I am like every other student, I have struggles in
school. I have probably the worst procrastination ever. I always do things last
minute. Especially things that are important like major essays and class
projects. Paying attention has also been a big struggle too. I have the
attention span of a cat. I get distracted so easily. I could be in class
listening to a lecture but then I look out the window and just zone out. That
is a terrible habit to have especially taking college classes. Talking has been
more of a problem than struggle I would say. I talk in almost every single
class, and I think that annoys most of my teachers. I just cannot help it
sometimes, especially when somebody starts the conversation with me. But I have
been working on all of this and that is why I do have accomplishments.
I have accomplished more than I would have thought
possible. I have acquired a good study habit. I used to never study before, but
I quickly realized that with some of my classes the tests are not a joke. I
have to study at least three days before the test in order to pass them. Good
organization was a key to how I have accomplished what I have. When I was not
organized I was all mixed up. I had different assignments for different classes
in all of my folders. Nothing was where it should have been. It was just very
hectic. But once I got organized I became more successful in my studies. I am a
really good test taker now. Since acquiring my good study habits and my
organization I rock most of my tests. I have my moments when I could have done
better but I always try my best. With good academic accomplishments I started
thinking of what could happen in the future and what I could aspire to.
My aspirations now are nothing like what I used to
aspire. Before I used to not care if I got distracted, now I do everything
possible so that does not happen. I do not sit next to windows anymore and I do
not sit next to people that I know I will talk to and socialize with. Since all
of that I really want to do is get above a 3.0 this semester. Most think it is
far fetched but I know I can do it. Once I set my mind to do something I do not
give up. One thing that I really hope to keep up with is HIV/AIDS research with
Dr. Kestler and my lab group. I was one of five kids last year to be accepted
into this group. It was a great honor to me, to be able to work with a famous
Microbiologist. That is probably number one on my list of aspirations.
It took me to years to figure out where I needed work and
where I was fine. Two years may seem like a lot of time but I know people who
still have not gotten it together yet. I love having my aspirations and my
accomplishments; it just shows me how much I am worth and what I have do to improve
on myself. But I think I cherish my struggles the most because without them I
do not think I would be where I am. I probably would have been kicked out of
Early College High School a long time ago. And since I have not I am going to
keep doing my best and keep climbing for my dreams.
Ambra, I am proud of your hard work and dedication. I would like to see more variety in your sentence structure and more transitional words and phrases.
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